Hi Jayden, the bio poem you've created is presented well, I like the descriptive words you added at the start. I am also a lover of sweets too! I also suggest that next time you could proof read your work to check for any mistakes. Overall I really liked reading your bio poem, well done Jayden!
Hi Jayden, the bio poem you've created is presented well, I like the descriptive words you added at the start. I am also a lover of sweets too!
ReplyDeleteI also suggest that next time you could proof read your work to check for any mistakes. Overall I really liked reading your bio poem, well done Jayden!
thank you for reading my poem and for the feedback. next time I will spell check my work, I like the comment, again thank you for the feedback.
Deletei think your very sassionate in your work was it hard to complete i like it.
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