Well done Jayden - you have written a very creative and imaginative narrative. You have lots of events occurring throughout the story. Remember to seperate your writing in paragraphs instead of one block of writing. When there is a change of scene or a new idea, create a new paragraph. Keep up the great writing! - Mrs T
Well done Jayden - you have written a very creative and imaginative narrative. You have lots of events occurring throughout the story. Remember to seperate your writing in paragraphs instead of one block of writing. When there is a change of scene or a new idea, create a new paragraph. Keep up the great writing! - Mrs T
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