Possibly one of the most action packed narratives I have seen to date Jayden - good job! You've included some peculiar elements to engage the interest of your audience (for example the panda, and your choice of other characters). I like the way you took on my feedback initially when you were creating this animation, particularly the way your storyline unfolded. While there are so many things happening, you need to make sure your audience are able to follow along and understand what is happening with ease - I think you achieved this well. When you create another animation, what would you do differently? - Mrs T
Wow the panda took me by surprise �� nice work
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